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by Verhaalen

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LechemanLecheman18 days ago

Finding a disconnect in this story that made it difficult to follow or become immersed. Not excluding a lack of information not being provided but that I was expected to understand.

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A short story writer in various genres. Of Dutch birth but living in the UK for many years. I appreciate comments but do not respond to them, sorry.