All Comments on 'Pushing Boundaries'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great first entry

Great story, can't wait till your next instalment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

i love it cherry pie. i hope this story goes even further. i want to see how it ends.

GypsyEyedGirlGypsyEyedGirlover 13 years ago
Mmmmmmm.... yummy!

You have me on the verge of being mad at you for ending at this point, but your descriptions, timing and flow have me in love with your potent sense of the power of want and desire. Can't wait to read more, maybe draw it out, play with us. Make us really pant for it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

Needs better editing, but a good start. Promising.

mekakymekakyover 13 years ago

Can't wait to read more =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good start

I really enjoyed reading each of their pov. This added more demension to the story. I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wow

you started on this story almost a year ago, and you haven't posted since December; thats a damn shame.

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