by sensitivelystrong
i love it cherry pie. i hope this story goes even further. i want to see how it ends.
You have me on the verge of being mad at you for ending at this point, but your descriptions, timing and flow have me in love with your potent sense of the power of want and desire. Can't wait to read more, maybe draw it out, play with us. Make us really pant for it!
I really enjoyed reading each of their pov. This added more demension to the story. I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks
you started on this story almost a year ago, and you haven't posted since December; thats a damn shame.