by indigogaia
This is the best airline story I've ever read, and a suberb story by any standards. I'm thoroughly impressed; I look forward to reading more of your works.
That was a lovely comment, thank you! I appreciate it so much. Sharing my writing is fairly new to me and I'm always anxious. I see a million mistakes (I'm terrible at proofreading and fixing punctuation) but I'm happy with what I've posted so far. The encouragement is the icing on the cake.
Very good story. Microsoft word does a decent job of spelling, grammar, and punctuation checking. However one must remember it checks for English they way it is supposed to be. People just don't talk in grammatically perfect sentences so don't let it change the flavor of what you want to say.
I read just enough to see that present tense stuff. I don't know why, but that just doesn't do anything for me. It only makes any kind of sense as a fantasy, or as a description being written as it's happening.
To each his/her own.