All Comments on 'Pushing Boundaries Ch. 02'

Excellent potential. Still suggest getting that editor.

I loved it!

Poor Dee, I think that she and David are both going to enjoy the fight. I hope that he doesn't try to play her like he seems to do the other girls at the school. Thanks

This story needs an editor, as well as punctuation and thorough read-through before it is resubmitted. It's a cute narrative, but the poor grammar and structure is incredibly distracting.