All Comments on 'Pussy for Escrow'

This has a huge amount of potential, but I read the story twice and still didn't understand half of the plot. It felt like it had been whittled down to fit a word limit, leaving it with major plot holes.

I think you should consider getting yourself an editor.

I agree with StrictDaddy.Although judging by the time line there is still a possibility of more to come. One can but hope.