All Comments on 'Putt Putt Strip'

I could not get past the in medias res.

but it escaped me. Confession: I was able to read it for the first few paragraphs, then I went to scan mode and almost made it to the end of page 1. The I skipped to page 2 and scrolled to the bottom, read up a few paragraphs and sensed that there was much less here than meets the eye. Sorry. I just couldn't get the attraction in a story where you have to screw around in a minature golf game to get people's clothes off.