All Comments on 'Putting Her Under'

It's quite obvious that English is not your natural language, I think you need to rely on another writer to reread your work or find someone you trust to proof out your stories before you release them. Secondly, hypnosis only works when a subject is freely willing to do what is asked of them.

Proof read honey. Otherwise, good story.

Really liked it. Doesn't matter if English isn't your first language. I am intelligent enough to understand what you meant and how the plot went in the story. So keep writing and know that you are appreciated.