All Comments on 'QuaranTeam - Dave in Dallas Ch. 03'

Moving along very nicely. Wonder if bad guy and his woman turn up again?

"shoes in socks" in -> and

Autocorrect error?: "so it wouldn't hurt to late her stay up past ten if it came to that.". I suspect, "late" should be "let" there.

This story is definitely a great fit for the Quaranteam Universe. I find it interesting to see each author's tame on getting the team set up and functioning, and the different kinds of attempts to corrupt the process. Already I'm feeling engaged with the characters in 'Dallas' (maybe because I'm native Texan) and I understand the mixed anti-mexican bias introduced by the unnamed moron who tried to engineer stealing Becca. I have a feeling we may see him again as the story continues....

I feel the need....the need for Speed!!!

Great chapter. Keep it up!!!

Fantastic story so far! I cant wait to read more of these chapters!

Rich, entitled bastards are everywhere...I'm glad she got away and that the MPs seem to be aware that it happened so they can work to prevent it unlike what happened in CurruptingPowers main story...

Well done, if a bit short....keep the crack coming!

Cool. A worthy chapter in the Quaranteam universe.

@dunmovyniv

Yes, that was deliberate.

You really should not steal lines from “Top Gun”. Those last three sentences were straight from Goose and his wife……

sqrt -1 is the imaginary root, i

2^3 is eight

the Greek capital sigma reads as 'sum'

the greek letter pi

i eight sum pi

Great way for Dave to balance the urgency with tenderness. Can anyone please make sense of that t-shirt equation for me?