by Illogically_Horny
This would have been an easy 5 stars had there not been a male involved. The writing and world building is great but I just can't get into futa on male stuff. I'll keep reading as long as the focus is placed more on futas only. With the whole mutation aspect, I'm sure you can continue to write wild and kinky scenarios for your futas to engage in!
Enjoyed it. Crazy enough yet erotic as hell. Could use more descriptive pictures of genitals.
It's weird that the sex and relationships read so logistical considering the size of the story. I would have liked more detail on what the characters feel and think.
It amazes me how you take my random-ass pitches and turn them into great stories, this one is downright perfect, I mean, I was expecting to like it, considering I liked your previous stories and I basically described all my kinks in that pitch, but it still managed to surpass my expectations
You improved a lot on my pitch, the addition of a girlfriend was something I didn't think of, but in retrospect is perfect
The story I think is more deserving of a sequel is part 5!