by Kabba118
Good detail, but didn't like the guy on guy action. Call it old fashioned, but Pete seems more confused then adventurous. So unless he and Ant were already a couple before Jordanne sprang on the scene, it's just too much
WHY do readers choose stories from the Group Sex category and then complain about male/male action? ! It’s group sex...there are bound to be m/m/f scenarios where the men touch each other. Deal with it.
In the absence of a Bisexual category, these stories fit better in Group Sex than they do in Gay Male. Stop grousing about male intimacy (or choose another category...there are plenty of perfectly straight categories).
Write on, Kabaa118.
Absolutely incredible. From first to last. Except, of course, the “white boy” comment which demeaned Ant completely. Now I hear it in my thoughts every sex scene, every chapter. Which ruins it all just enough. But…amazing writing talent. Unmatched in fact.