by LockedsubLA
Just loved it would like to hear more humiliation. I was a football player and love cock so very much. Thank you.
Good story. Don't leave us hanging for too long to keep hearing about what happens next.
I liked the concept. I think that's it's unrealistic for a college team to have only 3 seniors and 3 freshmen and for most of the students to be gay. It might be better for some to be straight and become dominated (and turned on by the gay guys). Some of the cock sizes seem a bit unrealistic, but what do I know. I love stories where the older, or more muscular, or more dominate get dominated by the younger, less muscular, or less dominate of the two. Of course it is your story so you will set it up as you prefer. Please continue with more chapters.
I never would have guessed this was your first story! You did excellent!! Looking forward to more!
This was really really good my friend. It had a good flow, a hot twist, plot points logically led into one another. You did good for a first story!