QUIET! Ch. 02

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"There's a burger place down the beach a pace from here." The girl said. She gave a quick glance and smile when she saw that Katrin and I were holding hands. The tension in the air dissipated a bit.

"Thank you." Katrin saw it too and took the initiative. "My name is Katrin and this is my girlfriend Juliana."

"I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to be rude. It's just. We don't see a lot of people around this area," the girl responded. The man hadn't moved or said a word. He looked a little afraid. "My name is Jessica and this is my boyfriend Matthew."

I thought her southern cadence was wonderful. Especially now that there was hope: they were only dating, not married.

Katrin understood it too. She moved a little more aggressively. "Would you two like to join us for lunch?"

"Ummm. Well..." The tension was back.

"We're just visiting from out-of-town and we have no idea where we are in relation to the restaurant," Katrin quickly said.

Things were more relaxed again, although I wasn't sure why. The man looked visibly relieved. Katrin seemed to understand something that I didn't.

"It's just a burger joint," Jessica replied. "But, sure. We'll show you where it is. Come on Matthew." Jessica took his hand protectively. "Where y'all from?"

"I'm from Savannah and Juliana is from Los Angles."

"California? Wow, that's far away."

"You know how it is, Jessica. You're not sure if your girl wants to be seen with you so she insists on living on the other side of the country." Katrin laughed easily at her own joke and Jessica started laughing too, giving her man a quick glance and smile.

"I know how that can feel like," Jessica continued laughing. "How did you convince her to visit all the way out here, Katrin?"

"Oh, after two years, I have my ways," Katrin winked at her.

Jessica smiled. "I bet you do."

We walked up to the hamburger restaurant-burger joint.

"You're a lovely couple. How long have you been together?" Katrin asked.

"Not quite as long as you two, but we hope to get married soon." Jessica was at ease, but Matthew became tense again after Jessica said "married."

As a doctor, I was embarrassed to have obviously missed so much of the un-said dialog that Katrin was using to bond with Jessica.

"What type of work do you do, Katrin?" Jessica asked.

"We're both doctors."

"Really?" Jessica replied in shock. "I thought you were both models." She took a long look at both of us.

"Oh, you're too kind."

"I'm sorry, but that's so hard to believe. I mean Juliana, you're the most exotic woman I've ever seen. And my friends and I have looked through just about every fashion magazine that you can imagine."

Katrin squeezed my hand. "Thank you, Jessica. I'm originally from Brazil."

"Is it true what they say about women from Brazil?" Jessica asked. Oh, oh. This could turn out badly.

"What do they say?" I smiled.

Katrin jumped in. "Yes. They all have big families!"

Jessica just stared at me for a second and then started laughing. That obviously wasn't her question, but Katrin once again saved the day.

"We hope to start a family really soon, right Matthew?"

"Umm, yes. Of course, Jess. Jessica."

Something wasn't right here. I think Katrin already knew.

I watched as Jess. Jessica reached under the table and reassuringly squeezed her man's cock. "Well, it's time for us to head back. Thank you for having lunch with us, Jessica and Mathew."

"You're welcome. How long are you in town?"

"A couple of weeks, then we're back to the two sides of the country," Katrin replied. "Will we see you again?"

Jessica concentrated. Then, while looking at her man: "Yes. You'll see us every day that you're here."

PLANS

"Jess, what are you doing!"

"Daddy, it was so wonderful today. I gave you so much and then that couple treated us just like we should be treated."

"Jess, you have school tomorrow!"

"Just two couples having a grand lunch together. I'm so proud that you're my man, daddy."

"Jess, just stop."

"What's the matter, daddy? We're a couple and couples go to the beach together every day. Just like Katrin and Juliana.

"Jess, they're grown women. Doctors."

"Oh, am I not good enough for you, daddy?"

"Jess. Of course you are. But you're still in school."

"Daddy, I'm going to college next year. I'll bet that Katrin and Juliana would help me get into a college. Maybe even a college in California."

"That's good Jess. But what about school tomorrow?"

"Then we could move to California together and leave this all behind."

"Jess, you're not making sense! I have a job and you have school tomorrow."

"Daddy, you see that big motel right up there? I want you to pull over. We're spending the night here and tomorrow we're going back to the beach."

"We need to go home. I have to go to work and you have to go to school tomorrow."

"Nope. You're smart. You can get a job anywhere." For a second, her daddy smiled.

"Daddy, do you love me?"

"Yes, of course I love you."

"Then pull into that parking lot and get us a room for the next two weeks." Jess held her breath.

Their truck slowed down and pulled into the motel's parking lot.

CHECK-IN

The girl at the front desk might have been a year older then she was, Jess estimated.

"We'll need a room for fourteen days, please," Jess said to her.

The girl looked dubiously at her. Turning her gaze from Jess to her daddy. Then back to Jess. "You mean fourteen nights? We charge by the night."

"Ok."

"Two rooms?" she asked Jess.

"One room," Jess replied.

"Two beds?"

"One king-size bed," Jess replied.

"That will be $1,543.92. I'll need your credit card, please."

"Jess? That's a lot of..."

"Pay the lady, honey."

"Umm, here you go."

"Thank you."

Jess reached her hand up her daddy's shorts and began to stroke his cock.

"Please sign here, sir." She glanced down and saw what Jess was doing and gave her a quick smile.

"Thank you. The buffet opens at 7:30 am. I'll show you to your room."

"Oh, there's no need for that. If we can have our keys..."

"Honey, let her show us to our room. It's only polite."

"Gabbi, can you work the desk while I show these people to their room." It wasn't a question.

--

"And here's the mini-bar. We'll add whatever you eat or drink to your credit card each day. Is there's anything else I can help you with, miss..."

"Jess. Call me Jess."

Smiling, she replied: "My name is Shelley."

"I'm having trouble with my honey's clothes. Maybe you could help me."

"Jess, what do you mean?"

Shelley ignored him. "Just one moment, Jess."

Shelley tapped the screen on her phone a few times. "Hey Gabbi, I showed the couple to their room. Yes. So, I'm going home. See ya tomorrow."

--

Shelley had seen the opportunity as soon as Jess and her man had walked through the door. She prided herself on her keen sense of identifying women who she could dominate. With Jess, she also sensed a business opportunity. One that could finally end her work at the motel.

--

"I'd be happy to help you, Jess."

"What's your honey's name, Jess?"

"Matthew."

"Ok, Matt. Let's get those shorts off."

Shelley reached for his shorts and untied them.

"Shelley, I'm going to call a friend."

"Of course."

"And now the shirt, Matt."

"Hi Chrissy! Yes I know it's late. I'm staying with my man in a motel near the island. For fourteen days."

"Nights," Shelley called out.

"Fourteen nights. I know about school. I'll tell them I'm sick. Can you meet us here on the weekend? Yes. Oh, and is mama there. Good. Just let her know we're ok and we'll be home in fourteen days."

"Nights, Jess."

"Fourteen nights. Ok, thanks. Goodnight Chrissy."

"Ok, here's what I'm going to need you to do, Matt. Just lay right back on the bed. Your girl is going to take care of your cock. I don't do any of that. And you're going to take care of my pussy. After fourteen nights, I'm going to pretend that I never met you."

Jess admired how Shelley took charge. Her daddy was responding really well to Shelley's instructions since she wasn't giving him any opportunities to respond. She was pleased with herself that she had taken the initiative to invite Shelley to join them.

There was also the fact that Shelley looked like a young China Anne McClain with her long luxurious brown hair, jet brown eyes, and an athlete's figure.

Shelley took her clothes off and then helped Jess do the same.

"Ok Jess, this is obviously your first time, so I'm going to help you."

"How do you know?"

"I just do."

"Matt's already hard thinking about this. See. So you're going to have to go slow on that big thing of his. First, wet his whole thing down with your mouth. That's it. Here, I want you to straddle him. No, regular cowgirl. That way you have control."

Jess's dark side came out with the thought that she was going to ride her daddy just like her mama.

"I'm going to be right behind you to help guide your hips. It's all in the hips."

Jess moved to straddle her daddy, pausing to lean down and kiss her daddy. This was the moment of truth, as a couple.

"Ok, just get the head in a little."

"I don't know if I can, Shelley."

"Just go slow. There you go. Ok, Jess?"

Jess let out a gasp as her daddy's cock head passed through her lips and into her pussy for the first time.

"What now, Shelley?"

"Here, I'm going to get behind you."

Shelley straddled Matt right behind Jess and moved in close. "Just put your legs outside of mine on either side of him. I'll do the work. Like our legs are kind of spooning."

"Like this."

"Yes, Jess. Just relax your legs so your thighs are on top of my thighs. That's it. Ok, now put your lower legs out in front of you like you're sitting in a chair."

"But, I won't be able to control anything, Shelley!"

"Do you want my help or not?"

"Yes."

"Ok. That's it. Just sit back so you're sitting on my thighs. Good."

Shelley reached around Jess's waist and grabbed her really tight, giving her a warm hug.

"This first one is going to be slow."

Shelley held Jess tightly and slowly sat back on her own legs like she was crouching, taking Jess down with her.

"Oh my god! It's too big! Stop, Shelley!"

"We can't go too slow Jess. This is going to feel a lot better soon."

"How soon?! Shelley, he's too big for me!"

"By next week it's going to feel real good. You'll be doing this by yourself."

"Next week?! Shelley, just stop!"

Shelley raised herself up and took Jess with her, pulling Matt's cock most of the way out of her. "There you go."

Jess was starting to cry. "It hurts too much Shelley! Please stop!"

Shelley crouched back down and took Jess with her. "There you go."

"Please stop! Shelley, it hurts really bad!"

Shelley, raised herself up again, taking Jess with her.

"No, Shelley, please stop!" Jess was screaming and crying at the same time.

Shelley took Jess down and then back up again. Pausing for a moment, before repeating the action. This time a little faster.

"No, Shelley, no!"

By their tenth time down and up, Jess was just sobbing.

Shelley knew it was time.

"Jess, we're going to find your rhythm now."

"What?! What does that mean?!! Just stop Shelley! It hurts too much!"

"It means that when I take you down and back up with me this next time, I'm not going to stop. I'm going to continue until we find a speed that's best for me. A rhythm."

"Best for you?!"

"Yes."

"Why, Shelley, why?!"

"Because I'm here to help you."

With that, Shelley took Jess down and then back up. Down and back up. Each time Matt's cock plunged in and out of Jess.

After half an hour, Shelley picked up the pace. Jess wasn't screaming anymore, just sobbing her eyes out and mumbling: "No Shelley, no."

Shelley picked up the pace some more. She was starting to get a good bounce off of the mattress and knew that she had found her rhythm.

Up and down they went together.

"Jess?"

"Are you on the pill?"

"What?"

"Perfect."

Shelley went faster. She could see that Matt was about to climax.

"Matt! Matt!" Shelley yelled above Jess's sobbing and the racket from the squeaking bed.

"Matt, I need you to climax soon. I'm going to go faster until you do. Call out when you do."

Shelly went faster still. She had left all the lights on so she could see his cock plunging in and out of Jess' pussy. The lighting wasn't great but it was good enough for their first video.

"I'm, I'm. Ooohhh god. I'm climaxing into my baby girl."

"Interesting," Shelley said.

Shelley plunged down one last time with Jess and then stopped as the hilt of Matt's cock reached Jess's pussy lips.

With the sudden quiet, Shelley could hear Jess sobbing while Matt was clearly climaxing everything he had into her.

After a while, Shelley lifted Jess up and disengaged herself from her. Then she guided Jess's hips back down onto Matt's cock until his ball sack was right up tight against Jess's pussy lips.

"Perfect."

Jess was completely out of it. She pulled her legs back into a crouch and then just laid down on her daddy's chest to sleep, with his cock still buried deep inside of her.

DAYLIGHT

Shelley gave Jess and Matt half an hour to sleep while she reviewed the video she had shot on her phone. She pulled out her computer from her backpack and made a few edits. Good enough for the website, but not great. She pressed the "upload" button on the website.

"Hey Jada, it's Shelley. Yeah, I know what time it is. I found her and she's going to make us a fortune. Both of us. I need you to come by the motel with your camera stuff tomorrow night to shoot a video. Bring your lights. Yeah. Goodnight."

--

"Jess? Jess?!"

Jess picked her head up off her daddy's chest. Her mascara had dried around her eyes with long drips dried onto her cheeks, giving her a gothic look.

"Hey, Shelley?"

"Jess, it's time."

"What? What time is it?"

"I need you to ride Matt again." Shelley didn't wait for a response. "I'll do all the work."

Shelley pulled Jess up into a straddle, marveling that Matt had remained hard enough to have sealed all of his climax inside of Jess.

Moving behind Jess, Shelley instructed her to again put her legs out in front of her. Jess sat back down onto Shelley's thighs without a word.

"That's it, Jess. I'm going to go slow again until Matt is fully hard." Shelley started down to her crouch, hugging Jess down with her. Then back up. A few more repetitions and she could tell that Matt was becoming huge again.

"Shelley. I can't. He's just too big."

Shelley began to find her rhythm.

"No Shelley, please. Don't. Not again."

Shelley moved her head to the side of Jess' so they were both better framed in the video. She wanted everyone who watched the video to understand that she had done this. She was in charge.

Shelley found her rhythm and the bed started rocking as Matt's cock stroked in and out of Jess. Jess had started to sob again. A good thing for the video.

An hour later, Matt climaxed into Jess.

Shelley ran her hands across Jess's belly, impressed with the amount of climax that Matt had produced after his second time. There was a hint of a bulge in her belly from all the climax, giving Shelley an idea.

She let Jess and Matt sleep again for a half-hour.

"Hey Jada, it's me again. Yeah, I know. I changed my mind. Can you get here by eleven this morning? There's a scene I want to video outside. Yeah. And pick up one of those bikini's that has a deep scoop in the front. The bottoms. Extra small. Halter top, medium size. One of those palm print ones down at the store. Red. Ok, see you in a few hours."

--

Shelley woke Jess again. She was getting good video—as good as possible with the motel's room lights. With daylight breaking, she opened the drapes to let the sun stream in.

"Jess? Jess?!"

"I need you to ride Matt again. I'll do all the work."

Jess didn't say a word as she straddled her daddy for the third time that night. Morning.

--

Matt had climaxed hard again into Jess, filling her pussy and making her belly bulge out nicely. She had the look of being newly pregnant.

There was a knock on the window. Jada had arrived.

Shelley unlocked the door. "Hey, thanks for coming. Did you bring everything?"

"Do you know how much trouble I'll be in if the university finds out that I took all of those lights and both of their Red Ranger..."

"I appreciate it. It's Friday, no one will miss the equipment. I'll help you return everything by Sunday night. Did you bring the bikini?"

"I had to buy two to get the size that you needed."

Shelley held up the bikinis. "These are cute. We'll use the medium top and the extra small bottom. Do you have any gaffer tape?"

"Absolutely. I don't travel anywhere without it," responded Jada.

--

"Jess? Jess?! I need you to wake up, it's morning."

"Please, not again Shelley."

Shelley pulled a short piece of black gaffer tape off the roll. "Here's what I need you to do. When I tell you to dismount Matt, do it quickly and lie down on your back."

"Why?"

"Just do it, Jess. Now."

Jess dismounted her daddy and before her ass could touch the bed, Shelley had pasted the gaffer tape over her bald pussy.

"Hey, why did you do that?!"

"To seal your daddy's climax in you. We don't want it pouring out of you."

"We don't?"

"No. Here, put this on. It's a gift. We're going to the beach with one of my friends."

"Oh my god Shelley, what time is it?!"

"Eleven-ish."

"Matthew and I are supposed to meet some friends at the beach in an hour."

"Perfect. We'll all go together."

FRIENDS

"Did we miss them?" Juliana asked Katrin.

"Oh, there they are over there. Looks like they brought some friends. That's odd."

--

For half the night, Katrin had explained to me what she thought was going on. I still had trouble believing it even though it made a kind of twisted sense.

"Why else would a teenage woman be in a relationship with a man who is obviously our age?" Katrin had asked me again.

"Perhaps she just enjoys his size?"

"I'm being serious, Juliana. You're going to have trouble prying Jessica away from Matthew. She's clearly in charge."

"Maybe I can offer her something she needs?"

"Maybe." Katrin looked unconvinced.

--

"You would have thought they would have mentioned that they were bringing friends with them?"

They walked hand-in-hand towards Jessica, Matthew, and her two friends. Katrin spied the camera first. "They aren't friends."

"What do you mean?"

Jessica struggled to her feet with the assistance of Shelley and waived at Katrin and Juliana.

"Jessica's belly looks... It looks like she has the beginning of a baby bump." Katrin observed.

"Maybe we just missed it yesterday in her other swimsuit. This one looks almost designed to accentuate it."

"It's as low in the front as yours is," Katrin gave me a quick smile.

"See how her one friend is gently stroking Jessica's hair while the other one hangs back? And Matthew looks like he's exhausted."

"They must have had quite a night," I replied to Katrin.

"That's not what I meant. It's a power play."

Both of Jessica's friends were obviously athletes. Tall, lean, muscular legs. Probably runners. Their matching neon green bikinis accentuated their gorgeous dark skin tone.

For the first time since last night's conversation, Juliana felt hopeful. She recognized the businesswomen stance in the friend stroking Jessica's hair. "We're going to get our man."

"Why do you say that, Juliana?"

"I'll be able to make a deal with the friend who is with Jessica. I can see it in her eyes. The key thing is to separate them. I'll talk to the friend who is with Jessica, you talk with the rest of them."

"Good luck, Juliana."

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YoungMom2YoungMom2almost 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

I'm very appreciative of your votes and comments (both private and public). In response to the main question being asked-- Yes, "Quiet!" and "Quiet! Ch. 02" are parts of an upcoming book that I'm writing which will be published in 2021. Because there are multiple story arcs, it's a complicated story. It's the type of writing that I enjoy authoring and reading. I'll post "Quiet! Ch. 03" next month which will be the final section that I'll post on Literotica. It will tie together parts of "Quiet!" and "Quiet! Ch. 02" while giving a sense of where the story arc of the book is going.

In repose to the Anonymous poster in "Quiet!" and "Quiet! Ch. 02" who recommends that, amongst other things, the characters are "Devoid of emotions..." and that I should "Smart up your main character and go to third person narration..." While I believe that your comments are well-intentioned, there's a reason why the characters appear to be in the emotional state that they are and why the narration that I've written is told through a particular character.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excruciating Prologue

When I first started reading this, the first thing that stroke me is that I thought I was reading a different story. The expansive level of this introduction really wears you out. It is an extended sci-fi psycho-marathon of one person narration that really takes too long and it is more non-erotic sci-fi than Non-Consent-Reluctance or BSDM.

To make matters worse, narration is switched from the already troubled use of first person for the weak and naive (but smart , according to what she does, no?) heroine to this other character. This introduction was excruciatingly long. The problems of the first part now are compounded by more convoluted narration from this other character. The author should not forget the reason for a story like this, develop better characterization, focus on a character as the lead subject or rooting interest.

Otherwise this is just like watching an air show. Tech on display. Devoid of emotions, conscience, reluctance, domination, in short , human factors. A heroine(s) in danger being done things to and enduring and , why not , thinking and eventually finding a resolution or at least an ambiguous outcome. Smart up your main character and go to third person narration, as the other poster stated.

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