All Comments on 'Quincunx Ch. 18'

by Beatnic_jazzman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Lol...they're

At the top of the second page you managed to use both 'there' and 'their' where 'they're' should have been. It made me cry inside.

More emphasis on the process of him now just being able to generate bathtubs at will and less of the now-boring sex would be nice.

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