All Comments on 'Quinn Family Halloween Pt. 03'

Drunk or not, the transition to deep throating him just wasn't believable. This part seems more like you were in a hurry to get something out or teaser to keep story going? 4*

too short

Who throws a party without knowing how many people are going to be there

Couldn't go to a four - 4 - due to typos and grammar errors.

Great story line, almost very descriptive, save for aforementioned items.

I agree with lassidorf. It was too short.

was very good keep going

Great job, thanks for sharing your work.

La verdad no entiendo porque los escritores tienen esa manía de precentar el personaje principal como un tonto