by MeanBlackjack
Look up what "doggy-style" is. Be a good idea to know the positions before writing about them.
very sexy story. loved the ex-girl friend part and really love the titty fuck finish on jennifers fabulous big tits!!
nice man...i've read your katy perry,Alba,Fox and now this...i can say u r the best celeb story writter...but u should quit the WWE thing couse we know its fake and thats make ur story un-imagnable..but thats my opinion...nice work though...could u do somethin starring kim kardashian? that will be awesome...
Hi Anonymous,
To start with, thank you for hiding behind the Internet and not dealing with a username. Secondly, this fic was my very first attempt at writing erotica. Still never mind, it seems that you're in the minority.
Cheers!
MBJ
If I counted the amount of times you used to word pussy... You must have used it every other sentence. This was poorly written, to be quite honest. Not the worst, but still bad.
If i must say so myself, again another good story form you my friend. I suggest yet again like Michelle's story to continue this one again you know, its very good and this one seemed more good than Michelle, but hell both are 5/5. very good.
Hey guys, I'm Mean Blackjack, the author of the fic. Just wanted to confirm yes, Ian was the 17 reay old banging JLH. Lucky git!
I'm glad you enjoyed reading it and your comments have willed me on to write another part of the Quitting Time universe. Quitting Time is going to continue with a Michelle Trachtenberg fic. Look for it soon!
In the mean time, I would love any more feedback from other writers. Please send away!
So many stories like this either use the celebrity as a crutch or beat the point into the ground. This was great.
the 30 year old? What a lucky bastard he is.