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All Comments on 'Rachael, Slave of Emarukistan Ch. 04'

by RachaelJane

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Cindy1001Cindy100110 months ago

The tone is light (probably with an attitude of 'don't complain over what you cannot change'), the narrative is heavy. The tale is enchanting, which I experience in a mix of sympathy and curiosity. Well done!

Qwer12Qwer1210 months ago

Outstanding and well developed 5 Star story. Great characters and excellent storytelling. Ready for more. Cheers

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Thanks for reading my profile. What can I say about myself? In 2021, after writing fan fictions and other stories for several years I started writing erotica as a hobby. Some of the stories I've posted here are adult adaptations of earlier stories I've written. More recent ...