by coquette_redux
This is only my second submission so I really appreciate the positive feedback!
You did it. This is far above the madding crowd of authors who fill these pages. There were so many good things. Keep it up!
R.
A fantasy piece where women are allowed to murder and attack men violently for their decisions (sleeping w him, staying.married to him) the first instinct of the character is to physically attack. Imagine if a man had.written this shit? A guy punches or throws shoes at women's heads in anger for problems that are equally his? This trash author, would probably give such a story one star. Which is the what I'm giving this: One star.
PS- The writing was average and the twist sucked.