by vanalas
Man Bruce should not have touched travis. And I also realize how much of a child Antonio is, he keeps blaming travis for the cause of his own actions. Great chapter vanalas.
I'm absolutely hooked , just loving the story please dont let your fans wait to long for the next chapter
Kiwi Fan
This is an exciting, fabulously written story!!! It will inevitably end up in The Hall of Fame stories, without a doubt! Travis/Praveen has my permission to slap a few people into the next chapter, if they so much as lay one finger on him, including the whiny, 'not my fault', Antonio!! Great story! Thank you and please stay in and stay safe!
I was so ready 4 this chapter that i fast charged my phone to get ready 4 it,,,this is the most wonderful chapter in The DH/RL era.....unlike season 1 that was full of putting prav low hehe,this has really shown his power starting from the sales scene
After praveen agreeing to help granny i was like,boy is he kidding me??? But huh after saving her and the scurf scene i realised that t might be her the reason y praveen will get back to that house now see...even his phone is in granny's room wow,Travis is not going anywhere and now hope,boy am scared how is he going to face those all-poisoned brains???geez even the idea gets me freaking out
Hehe,remember how baby Travis shown up at the party with that flubbergusting look,huh??? I swear even now am still seeing him...how that foolish Bruce got envious hehe,bitch be ready coz now we r just standing
...how the governer welcomed Travis hahaha God just lyk a prince arriving in the palace,,,how the attention was snapped 4rm Antonio to Praveen my baibeeeee....those soft kisses frm the governer God,praveen took it off amazingly
God๐๐๐๐๐๐๐remember how my boo turned into a sexy lovely dancer,those lovely moves how he fucking rode Ant's dick magically fuckkkkkkk,...boy we got the fool ashaming himself with the hard on hahahaha Travis is a pervert,remember how he grinned after that hehe........how they danced with the governor hahaha page 3 was the best in all pages
Hmmmmn,so Ant was so mad when he was proved huh....i thought he was gonna slap Travis but who am i kidding...i mean after leaving Bruce like a flash to hold Travis,how wud he kno how to control his beak hahaha.....am sure thats y he z so mad coz he finally shown his lust hahaha,how Travis declined his dance offer I was lyk yep baby kill him with that body
After the shoe defeat.....the fools continued to become even stupid beyond the earth level hahahah God,how Travis turned the glass piece and placed it on Bruce's neck,man the spinning was okkkk.....those threats hahaha,how Andrea recieved the wine in the ugly face hehe,,,we r just starting baby just watchhhh.......Ohhhh how Ant insulted that fuckkkkkk...i enjoyed seeing that fucker alone and dazed on the floor when Ant left him hihihihihi....stinking fucker
Ant was slapped hihihi๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐slap them baby and after pay them hahahaha......now ts tym for it,,Bruce looks brave now but hey lets see how he will look. When Granny calls Prav Angel,,,hihihi that fucker,remember the lunch scene in chapter 3...the jealous and the ass-gazes 4rm Antonio,now its gym 4 him to long 4 real hehehehe.......i love this,Just Travis is making it hard now how about SANTIAGO'S ARRIVAL????
I was working when i saw d submission,so am sorry 4 late commenting my king now am all eyes onnnnnnnnnnn...........Prav amidst family members,huh lets see noowwww
..actually i thought it was Ant's imagination but when all of them looked the entrance side i was lyk FUUUUCCCCK HE IS REALLY THERE!!!!!
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THEME SONG "needed me"-Rihanna
Roar--katy perry
Fading-Rihanna
......hit the floor-jennifer loved and pit bull
....pon de replay-Rihanna
Leave--joking๐๐๐๐๐๐my king am ready bring it on
wow! so much intensity of emotions in this chapter... the best so far
vanalas, you kept your readers in your hand...which means please go on and
post another chapter...you keep us enthralled!
I love this story it's simply the BEST!!! I enjoyed reading this chapter. Oh god the drama is on another level (so intense). Van you always deliver way more than expected. Can't wait for another chapter l'm so excited and nervous of what will happen next. #BestStoryโค๏ธ
I really love the plot of this story and for more fans to enjoy this masterpiece of yours
I think you must post the next chapters quickly
You are losing me on this one due to the slowness of the narrative and I still need to wait for a long time just to read this. Since I love you and I really like your story I guess I'll need to endure all of this
It gets predictable and boring sometimes
But I am still hoping because you are the best and I trust you