All Comments on 'Raging Love Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Damn

Man Bruce should not have touched travis. And I also realize how much of a child Antonio is, he keeps blaming travis for the cause of his own actions. Great chapter vanalas.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Number 1 Fan

I'm absolutely hooked , just loving the story please dont let your fans wait to long for the next chapter

Kiwi Fan

mfa607mfa607about 4 years ago

Wow ๐Ÿ˜ณ! Thank you!

OnimOnimabout 4 years ago
WOW...just WOW!!!

This is an exciting, fabulously written story!!! It will inevitably end up in The Hall of Fame stories, without a doubt! Travis/Praveen has my permission to slap a few people into the next chapter, if they so much as lay one finger on him, including the whiny, 'not my fault', Antonio!! Great story! Thank you and please stay in and stay safe!

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ MAKING IT THE BEST IN MY MIND WITH UNBROKEN,STAND 4 LOVE,MIGUEL AND FOREVER YOURS.....haha let me stop or else am gonna mention all

I was so ready 4 this chapter that i fast charged my phone to get ready 4 it,,,this is the most wonderful chapter in The DH/RL era.....unlike season 1 that was full of putting prav low hehe,this has really shown his power starting from the sales scene

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
The "help granny scene"

After praveen agreeing to help granny i was like,boy is he kidding me??? But huh after saving her and the scurf scene i realised that t might be her the reason y praveen will get back to that house now see...even his phone is in granny's room wow,Travis is not going anywhere and now hope,boy am scared how is he going to face those all-poisoned brains???geez even the idea gets me freaking out

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
All eyes are on me bitch.....what now???

Hehe,remember how baby Travis shown up at the party with that flubbergusting look,huh??? I swear even now am still seeing him...how that foolish Bruce got envious hehe,bitch be ready coz now we r just standing

...how the governer welcomed Travis hahaha God just lyk a prince arriving in the palace,,,how the attention was snapped 4rm Antonio to Praveen my baibeeeee....those soft kisses frm the governer God,praveen took it off amazingly

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
The fascinating sexy baby

God๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€remember how my boo turned into a sexy lovely dancer,those lovely moves how he fucking rode Ant's dick magically fuckkkkkkk,...boy we got the fool ashaming himself with the hard on hahahaha Travis is a pervert,remember how he grinned after that hehe........how they danced with the governor hahaha page 3 was the best in all pages

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
Now THE FURIOUS KISSSSSS

Hmmmmn,so Ant was so mad when he was proved huh....i thought he was gonna slap Travis but who am i kidding...i mean after leaving Bruce like a flash to hold Travis,how wud he kno how to control his beak hahaha.....am sure thats y he z so mad coz he finally shown his lust hahaha,how Travis declined his dance offer I was lyk yep baby kill him with that body

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
Poor Branded ,๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†hahahahsTHE FAILURE DUO

After the shoe defeat.....the fools continued to become even stupid beyond the earth level hahahah God,how Travis turned the glass piece and placed it on Bruce's neck,man the spinning was okkkk.....those threats hahaha,how Andrea recieved the wine in the ugly face hehe,,,we r just starting baby just watchhhh.......Ohhhh how Ant insulted that fuckkkkkk...i enjoyed seeing that fucker alone and dazed on the floor when Ant left him hihihihihi....stinking fucker

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
God,this chapter was about just humiliation

Ant was slapped hihihi๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜slap them baby and after pay them hahahaha......now ts tym for it,,Bruce looks brave now but hey lets see how he will look. When Granny calls Prav Angel,,,hihihi that fucker,remember the lunch scene in chapter 3...the jealous and the ass-gazes 4rm Antonio,now its gym 4 him to long 4 real hehehehe.......i love this,Just Travis is making it hard now how about SANTIAGO'S ARRIVAL????

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
Am up so much

I was working when i saw d submission,so am sorry 4 late commenting my king now am all eyes onnnnnnnnnnn...........Prav amidst family members,huh lets see noowwww

..actually i thought it was Ant's imagination but when all of them looked the entrance side i was lyk FUUUUCCCCK HE IS REALLY THERE!!!!!

..........

THEME SONG "needed me"-Rihanna

Roar--katy perry

Fading-Rihanna

......hit the floor-jennifer loved and pit bull

....pon de replay-Rihanna

Leave--joking๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒmy king am ready bring it on

AKA983AKA983about 4 years ago
That was an epic chapter

Thanks to you Vannnn

AKA983AKA983about 4 years ago
That was an epic chapter

Thanks to you Vannnn

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
what a chapter!

wow! so much intensity of emotions in this chapter... the best so far

vanalas, you kept your readers in your hand...which means please go on and

post another chapter...you keep us enthralled!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing chapter

I love this story it's simply the BEST!!! I enjoyed reading this chapter. Oh god the drama is on another level (so intense). Van you always deliver way more than expected. Can't wait for another chapter l'm so excited and nervous of what will happen next. #BestStoryโค๏ธ

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
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Where's the darling Santiago..??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I love the story

I really love the plot of this story and for more fans to enjoy this masterpiece of yours

I think you must post the next chapters quickly

You are losing me on this one due to the slowness of the narrative and I still need to wait for a long time just to read this. Since I love you and I really like your story I guess I'll need to endure all of this

It gets predictable and boring sometimes

But I am still hoping because you are the best and I trust you

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