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by KiaKim12

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eaffinityeaffinityover 3 years ago

Now that's a dirty story! I made love in the rain once. Your story brought back fond memories. I liked that you used characters who I am already familiar with in your story. And yes, I am VERY pleased with your story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Nice story, but full off grammatical mistakes. I would suggest you to look for some editor and let him/her check it before you publish in the future. Wish you good luck.

KiaKim12KiaKim12over 3 years agoAuthor
Grammar.

I'm not sure Joseph would be an expert in English grammar when it's not his mother tongue. But I'll take your advice and check it further.

Kim

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My name is Kia - call me Kim (Kimberley), my English name. I am an accountant, have my own business and I live in New Zealand. I came from Thailand to study but liked it here so I stayed. I am friends with two others on here. kiwianne12; sexysue12; The stories that I will pub...