All Comments on 'Random Romp'

by KrypticNote

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BlueViolet81BlueViolet816 months ago

It was too confusing with the flip-flopping between first person and third person narrative.

arch3rarch3r6 months ago

Fasntastic story!!! Please continue!!

memangeshmemangesh6 months ago

good story, nice vivid description of the act, would love to read more of your work..keep it up

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