All Comments on 'Randomly Horny'

Both characters act much too eager to get the sucking and fucking checked off their list; like assembly line sex. Add character nuance, sensuality, and at least some satisfaction. Your closing 'I drive away, feeling dirty and used. But somewhere find pleasure in the fact that I was now a certified faggot.' 19's first time wasn't lusty, just sad. I do hope you continue writing.

But you have somehow managed to make what should have been the account of a happy experience seem sad.

The lad should have been on cloud nine after such an initiation--not feeling dirty and used.

You're a good writer. Try making cock sucking and butt fucking joyous events in your future stories.

This story was kinda gay