All Comments on 'Randomly Horny'

This story was kinda gay

But you have somehow managed to make what should have been the account of a happy experience seem sad.

The lad should have been on cloud nine after such an initiation--not feeling dirty and used.

You're a good writer. Try making cock sucking and butt fucking joyous events in your future stories.

Both characters act much too eager to get the sucking and fucking checked off their list; like assembly line sex. Add character nuance, sensuality, and at least some satisfaction. Your closing 'I drive away, feeling dirty and used. But somewhere find pleasure in the fact that I was now a certified faggot.' 19's first time wasn't lusty, just sad. I do hope you continue writing.