All Comments on 'Rare Breed'

please add more to this story! it was great!!!

Is a great story i enjoyed it very much hope you continue to write

Liked this a lot. Nice mix of characters. They're confident and know what they want. Maret's family sounds interesting too. Good job :-)

this was really pleasing to read.

i wouldn't mind reading about her sisters and how they got paired up. who can resist a pair of hunky twin he? ;-)

Great start, good storyline and a whole lot of questions! Just how I like it! Can't wait to read more *hint hint*

A prehistoric were-cheeteh. I never heard that before. It will be interesting to see how the rest of the family interact. I hope to read more.

but you need to proof read better.

and is not how you spell an.

live stock does not mean the same as livestock.

would be does not mean the same as would-be.

defiantly is not an alternate spelling for definitely.

prospective is not the same as perspective.

wonder is not the way to spell wandered.

Ooooo I like Shane. Great start and I am looking forward to the other chapters! I like werecats so much better than wolves! It's a nice change!

for taking so long to get around to reading your stories. I have had you on my list for a while but just haven't had the time to read very much at all. First off I'd like to say that I love the way your characters bounce off the page, they're very strongly written and the story ideas you come up with are great. I'm not going to be as snarky as FAQ about the grammar although, yeah, there are issues with that and I wish I had a little more free time to sit down and do some editing with you because this story builds much better than the one shot tales and I reckon we could get it reading really well.

But having said that, it's doing you no harm right now so keep on doing what you're doing. As someone else observed, nothing improves your writing as much as (reading and) writing more and more. :-)

Horribly clichéd, and you seriously, SERIOUSLY need an editor.

i am glad to see that you finished the story and if the rest of the chapters are as good as this one then it is going to be an exealent story just hope that your other storys are as good and if icould i would give it another five stars just becuase of the great transition between plot and the realy hot stuff total 10 stars