All Comments on 'Razor Ch. 04'

5* as always. I would appreciate it if you make it more obvious when you switch POV between characters. It's a little confusing sometimes keeping track of who is speaking.

Mary really is insufferably arrogant and annoying.

I'm with Mary slightly disappointed in William , a promise is a promise , but hey we're all human so we're all flawed somewhere. Good to see how she interacts with Sean. And how she shows others that there is life after deep shit. Amazing how her scattered brain jumps from thought to thought. Will she burn out or can she keep it up saving her "loved ones" and.....herself.

5 stars...( and.....maybe.....your stories aren't for morons....SomeSayLove , you may have to put a moron reading warning in place....just sayin'.... )