All Comments on 'Ready or Not'

This a submission for the 750-word contest, so forgive the shortness :)

This is the first 750-word entry that I genuinely like. Most of the contenders (at least what I've read in Lesbian Sex) either cram in too much or spend too much time on the sex itself to present a complete thought. Brevity is the soul of wit, and you've managed to condense a whole story into a snapshot. Best of luck.

I forgot to breathe! Sexy as hell.

Don’t tell the loving wives group about this.