All Comments on 'Really?'

Gonna finish this sharp little esp tale?

What the hell do you think a monogamous marriage is? It's just sex. Men sacrifice A LOT....to have very boring sex with only one woman. She'll become loose and fat, but that's okay...cuz at least she'll bear you a son or daughter.

That's a man's perspective. Women of course think marriage is different...cuz they get A LOT more. Emotional support, physical safety, an extra care giver, someone to help around the house, an emotional tampon for their constant venting, and the status a husband can give her. For women....sex is a small component. For men it's one of two components. It's literally half the reason a man marries, sex.

Hell, a man GAINS status from bedding many women. Even though marriage is a terrible idea for the man, he does get two small consolation prizes. She's broken one of two vows already that make marriage even look tolerable.

If a man needs a real friend, he's got other male friends. a companion? a dog.

No need for Chapter 2. This flash story is just a tasty snack. Don't try to add anything else.

R.

Why do they always say, I never meant to hurt you. and it was just sex? Bullshit kick her ass out and expose the fuckers.

I get no development but this really had no end. It could a Twilight zone type and he's stuck in a loop or he gets a girlfriend or he kicks tracy to the kerb.

I have read similar when everyone was normalising an affair and the mc reacts in various ways.

Maybe you should go back to whatever else it is you do.

BURN THE WORLD!

Needs finished. In other words WTF??

But if this is it and you don't post a 2nd chapter then this is unfinished garbage. I HATE unfinished stories. PS - his parents??? That's just weird.

That was a nightmare for sure. Is it over?

Story makes no sense. You gonna Have to extend the story to bring about some kind of closure. As it stands on it's own it might be two stars.

no build up/ no detail/ not much to write about mate

It's finished. That's what flash stories are all about, and the little twist at the end is perfect. Just how it's supposed to end.

Well done for a first Flash Story

And please do not write a part 2. It has a perfect little O. Henry ending as it is.

Thanks for sharing.

There's no way he can win unless he dumps them all and disappears completely.

Time to sell everything, grab all his cash and start a new life somewhere else.

Its called the Twilight Zone!,,,,, Or Days of our Lives,,,, I've even heard it called The Bold and the Beautiful.?...What ever they call it..."Wow"... It Makes Good Reading..5 Stars. ★★★★★ WOOF!

Thanks. 5*

As soon as I left the cheating slut I had married, and never saw my parents, son or former employer again and started my new life with all our former assets and a new an faithful girlfriend.... Thankfully I never had to wake from that dream, because it was actually real life.

Good story. Very believable.

Even sounded like something that actually happened to someone I know.

He saw the signs, but refused to seriously acknowledge them... too bad his mind was screaming at him "Really?"

Keep those flashes coming, author.

and was feeding to his conscious mind by way of a dream?

Problem is, now he has a nightmare that he cannot wake up from.

Awkward.

I would call this a Drive-By story. Only one victim

But next time you get inspiration to do a quick story go for a walk or have a glass of water.

Somewhat fun to read.

I agree it doesn't need a second part.

Only one line:

"So long Tracy, it was only a marriage".

4 out of 5 from me.

As did this one. Maybe the last two lines gave it a bit of something interesting and a smile for the reader who had made it to the end.

And "it was just sex" was clearly intended as a punchline with meaning to the LW readership.

Fair enough, but it still was a nightmare story.

Lue

Nope, just another writer who thinks it's cute to leave stories unfinished and the 'dreaming of wife cheating' then suddenly wakes up has been done before and done much, much better than this garbage.

. . . It was just sex, has had his feelings hurt a time or three. Rejected, beaten down by real women, he sounds like a man who has never had a decent relationship in his life. He has, in effect, reduced all women to their pussies and their uteruses.

So were all the other fuck scenes real too? Guess he'd better check on the parents. Sounds like he's going to need a new place to sleep.

Using the city from "Join the Club" where things went wrong, it's time for Luke to get out of Austin. There's a reason why the city has the motto, "Keep Austin Weird".

Very entertaining. Gave it 4*s.

A plot that makes sense. Good enough dialog, believe it is a nightmare buddy 🤯.

So what happens now IntuitiveJ ⁉️

I am curious and

AMerryman

PLEASE!!!

Why not have stories that are at least somewhat believable? This is garbage

I gave it three stars. Now I know how to rate my weird dreams

Don't let the shit birds see you sweat!

I just ran through all comments and am wondering who let the anony's out of the asylum!

Someone had once posted that it was getting difficult find new ways to discover cheaters (car in driveway, text on phone, anonymous email...) so your dream scheme was very cleaver!

Once I dreamt my wife was in bed with another man who was about to shove his large cock in her but I woke up before he did. Damn, I was disappointed.

Nice twist to the story.

I have got to signup to avoid being with all the chickensh** Anons.

Good fun read, I don't know why some read here, probably because they have nothing to do all day and need something to pick on.This is erotic entertainment not the church magazine.

A flash story, no 2nd part needed. Good well written fun. Thanks 4*

Good job on a great story in 24 hours.

Yup. Very very good.

4-stars & Favorite

Sort of saw it was a dream when the wife ws on a mattress in the living room but didn't catch the twist. I think it is fine as is. No part 2.

Going to bug you again for a follow up. Please give this man his balls back, his whore a very thorough spanking and humiliation and the assholes that fucked his wife some well earned payback?

Ha! Very enjoyable

That didn't work.

An usual LW story has the build up,

the drama and the aftermath.

A flash story has the drama

and a short insight into the build up and aftermath.

No build up or aftermath here.

So instead of being a flash story,

this was really just a flash.

It gets a star for an interesting idea,

so 2 out of 5 from me.

Short and pointed

That is definitely a nightmare and your wakeup is even worse.

This submission makes it painfully obvious why the author usually puts much more time and effort into the work he chooses to share. His usual dedication is appreciated.

I like stories with a twist like that. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

Might have been good if the story went on but just the twist at the end wasn't enough for me.

Waking up to the real nightmare. Bravo!

What nightmare? His family is getting screwed and everybody except him is happy about it.

Couldn't find something better to do with your time that to write this?

Disappointing... Cuck hubby just whines to "please stop" fucking the neighbors???

"It was just sex."

"No, it was also betrayal and the end of your marriage. So it must have been GREAT sex considering what you've traded for it."

Sometimes the subconscious puts things together that the conscious mind cannot. A happy ending would be more fun, but this ending worked best. Well told.

LOL, now Luke wishes it was just a dream

The story situations are unrealistic and over the top but it was Good of you to throw that ending in as the mind does put things together without a person being aware of it happening and can surface as premonition or the feeling that something is not right. Dreams sometimes are the resault and ignored as just a dream...the brain works in funny ways.Its actually pretty dam amazing...

If you can’t finish the damn story don’t post it!!

Nice quickie. Very well done. Five stars.

Eep

I see Tracy as escaped from Hooked1957's profile and ended up here. That bitch.

Not very funny.

So did he divorce her? Kill her? Kill the two ass-hats?? Leave? Disappear??? This really sucked. Minus 1 star because it was a good yarn, but just too fucked up to be real. The Bear didn't like it.

@Trainer: Hooked1957's Traci spells it with an i. This person (who obviously shares several traits with Hooked's Traci) uses a y. Maybe they're related?

Shouda dreamed he massacred them all.