All Comments on 'Rebecca's Present'

by Kwing

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Carnevil9Carnevil9almost 13 years ago
Short and Sweet!

Very nice! Short, quick, and erotic. And I love how you keep the background deliberately vague; that lets anyone fit it into their own experiences. Great job.....Carney

Corpse_riderCorpse_rideralmost 13 years ago
Nice to open . . .

A very well written, concise piece of erotica. Atmospheric and sexually charged, with likable characters. Leaves you wanting more.

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