All Comments on 'Rebuilding Ch. 02'

Your writing, as usual, is superb!!!

Still very amazing love story. However leaving, the person responsible for keeping his heart alive; putting the two finally together after all the years knowing Caitlin had the crush for so long; out still when the opportunity openly presented itself on New Years was a mistake that probably hurt both Amanda and Caitlin, based on Caitlin's comment about Amanda's performance.

A little disappointed, for the blatant hypocrasy.

Too many, to my liking, deviations.

As such, nice story