by JacobGoody
I think this is really well executed. Great central idea, great flow throughout, and excellent attention to detail (like the name tag thing). Very enjoyable.
A well executed account of total submission. I love how after sucking and be ducked by the older men they cleaned Geoff by pissing on him. Yummy.
As curious a mixture of ageism and eroticism as I've ever read. Being an old fucker myself, I couldn't help but be annoyed by the stereotyping. But at the same time, especially given how the protagonist gets it in the end (so to speak), I also couldn't help being intensely aroused by it all. A quirky story, told very well.