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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nice beginning....

Nice beginning there buddy... but do continue this further and jus take it a lil slow as he tries to understand his new abilities...... good work...

verbicideverbicideover 7 years ago
Stroup or Sprout?

I liked it well enough, but the name change two thirds the way through was irritating.

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I'm now also publishing erotic stories on Smashwords under the pen name Jane Mesmeri. If you like what I've posted here, you might want to check me out.