by i122
VERY sexy. Loved it. I did see a goodly number of word gaffs where the word printed was a correct word but obviously not the intended word. That is a sure sign that you relied on a Grammarly kind of computer spell-checker rather a slow proof reading yourself. You could engage one of us Volunteer Editors to do this for you with only a couple days delay in publication. DO, keep 'em coming.
The last disrespect should end any marriage i don't care about correctness that final one thing ruined the story for name he agreed to give her this and she goes and does that to him she deserves to be locked out of the house and divorced with prejudice. No man deserves that
Married women DO NOT "reconnect" with old lovers, not even to text, let alone fuck.
Easy to see why your stories score in the mid 3's. Your plot deserves about a 2 while your writing craft should score a 4, since you are fairly new at this. I rate it a 3!
A *1 this time just because Odiouser loved it, and you had whorewife and cuckold tags.
I appreciate the constructive feedback and yes I need to slowly read before posting. Otherwise the story was fun to write. Some of it was loosely based upon actual events in our life.
Somebody is very, very confused about female anatomy.. the lack of understanding of the location of the cervix, combined with the sheer impossibility of the act described, is like a signed confession of being an Incel.