All Comments on 'Red Bull for the Wife Ch. 02'

by DenverJeepGuy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
It’s funny

How all these silly trolls comment that they would throw her to the curb, but all of them are sitting alone jerking their little peckers over porn because they don’t actually have a woman in their lives. Hahaha

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 5 years ago
WOW!

If you can't say anything good, say nothing. Wise advice and I have nothing to say.

DenverJeepGuyDenverJeepGuyover 5 years agoAuthor
If you don't like cuckold stories...don't read cuckold stories

If you don't like cuckold stories...don't read cuckold stories

I can't believe that needed to be stated, and yet here we are.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 5 years ago
DJG, it's not that I hate all can cuck stories, For example Good husband wrote a few good ones

But when a story has a manipulative and selfish bitchwife, a little bitch husband, primitive dialog between the spouses, and erotic scenes with all the appeal of toilet wall drawings, then I am inclined to "meh"it and move on.

I don't hate your story, and if this type of stoker works for you, great. I also know a lot of cuck humiliation fans will like it. Thanks for sharing it, and for having the stones to allow scoring and comments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Don't you get deleted a lot, luedon?

You should be used to it by now. Anyone who has bitten as many people as you have puts the sharks to shame. You're like one of those little sharks, big mouth, but not much else

Impo_65Impo_65over 5 years ago
There is a reason for deleted comments

Here’s a novel idea, if you don’t want your comment to be deleted, then maybe write something worth reading. Simply spewing a load of hate will get you deleted every time. I applaud every author who deletes the nonsense.

DenverJeepGuyDenverJeepGuyover 5 years agoAuthor
I really do own a Jeep

If you write a garbage comment, expect it to be deleted.

If you submit constructive, well-written criticism like "oldbearswitch" did, then I will definitely leave it up. He did a great job of detailing exactly what he didn't like and why.

Also, I don't write these stories in the hopes I get a good rating. I couldn't care less. I write this for the people that enjoy my writing and ask me to write more. As long as they ask for more, I will continue to write--for them.

TediumsShadowTediumsShadowover 5 years ago
like the story

I am very intrigued

very intense situation....awesome!

your scenes are very short

maybe draw them out, add atmosphere. Some build up...

just being greedy because I want more! :)

it seems wife is in the driver seat.

but I'd love for even her to lose control

the bulls in her future aren't automatons, there are things they want and want to do

maybe artistically course the story so that it's not even clear when her grip on the wheel began to fail

"what! what are doing? I only wanted you guys to bukkake me!"

"shut up! I want to jam this garden hose four feet up your ass....I wanna see what happens when I blast the water!"

"I wanna fist you" "wait no, that's not why I set this up!"

"Hey dude, come back for her on Monday, when we are thru with her."

"well that's not really what we...what she had planned"

"can you hear me! come back on Monday....and bring some crutches for her, she wont be able to walk for awhile"

thanks for writing and posting

TediumsShadowTediumsShadowover 5 years ago
cuckold story scoring

because of the mix here at LW (there are entire websites that post cuckold stories but here it's lumped into "LW") this is a very mixed environ

there are the constant screams for segregation (but seemingly that would take too much effort)

cuck haters will click and scroll to the bottom of cuck stories to low ball the ratings.

(I guess they have nothing better to do)

hell, I don't even open every cuck story if the tags don't draw me or I see something I don't care for in the description. (what a concept! choosing the stories that appeal to you and reading THEM! naw, that'll never catch on around here)

the result is cuck stories start with low ratings.

as time goes by, fans will find and read your older stories on purpose

and ratings become more accurate (they climb steadily)

just for fun you can do this: remember your rating while it's pasted on 'new' page. then check it every month or so.

27thNC27thNCover 5 years ago
Loved the story

And love the fact that you don't take shit. Bravo. Now let's see how this story plays out.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
A thin skinned

A thin skinned pussy like you couldn't possibly drive a jeep. It wouldn't let you touch it.

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