All Comments on 'Red Eye'

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SirMerlin_6_9SirMerlin_6_9over 1 year ago

Loved it from beginning to the dripping end!

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

I have had head, and sticky finger in the air, but never managed the mile high club

Lovecraft_LoreLovecraft_Loreover 1 year ago

5 stars

Great first story. Short but concise.

Westman99Westman99over 1 year ago

A nice first story. As a writer, you have several typo's, it doesn't over worry me but would look better if you proof read before publishing. Good luck with future stories. A.

sslarivio1sslarivio1over 1 year ago

I have read both your stories now and I really like your style. Its not just about sex, you have build up to the sex also. Great job for your first stories. I have favorited you and look forward to any new works!

StrappySandalsStrappySandalsover 1 year ago

Very good! Love those likable characters! You write nice, readable stories. I'm going to read more!! I liked both Becca and Emily and going to find who else you've got in your line-up!

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