by AdrianJf
You need either to Proof Read and Edit, or get someone to do it for you!
Many errors, either miss spelling, wrong words or words completely omitted!
Any errors there were didn’t detract from my enjoyment, I love what you’ve written. You’ve portrayed Jenny and her deeply hidden desire for raw, filthy sex perfectly. Very authentic erotica and therefore highly arousing for me. Now I’m off to find my 62yo wife and persuade her upstairs for a thorough servicing.
Very good story! Reminded me of doing much the same with an Aunt. It got better and better, as well as the follow up to this wil be!