by Marriedkinkylife
Please keep it going soon. For instance, how did Lisa and Tom do?
Thumbs up to a very very well written story. Hope it continues to progress. Dan needs to eat and clean more.
Hot story, really need to know what happens next.
Please write more chapters.
One error (that I doubt anyone else cares about), as the yacht in the story doesn't plane, it can never go faster than 8.8 knots, no matter how much wind or sail.
Other than that, a nicely detailed sailing story.
H
Good writing but it needs at least two more chapters to resolve where Lisa and Dan's explorations lead and the discoveries they make along the "spectrum."
What a terrible place to stop writing. I will avoid this writer in the future, for I fail to see the humor in ending a story this big and long in mid-air.
XYZ
I’ll join the crowd … y do u leave stories hanging when there is definitely more to write? That said, I’ve read your stories in date order and this one, by far, has been the best.