by Marriedkinkylife
Skipping to the end for a quick comment. "I don't know what all she has planned for you. All I can say is whatever it is, trust her. It will be worth it." If a guy who I know liked to be dominated, as he was wearing a chastity cage at the moment, told me that - I'd laugh, turn around and walk away as fast as I could. I'd gladly (and have) go down on a woman I (or another) had just fucked, unless she demanded it. But domination - not hardly. Too old to put up with that Bravo Sierra.
I’ll join the crowd … y do u leave stories hanging when there is definitely more to write? That said, I’ve read your stories in date order and this one, by far, has been the best.
What a terrible place to stop writing. I will avoid this writer in the future, for I fail to see the humor in ending a story this big and long in mid-air.
XYZ
Good writing but it needs at least two more chapters to resolve where Lisa and Dan's explorations lead and the discoveries they make along the "spectrum."
Hot story, really need to know what happens next.
Please write more chapters.
One error (that I doubt anyone else cares about), as the yacht in the story doesn't plane, it can never go faster than 8.8 knots, no matter how much wind or sail.
Other than that, a nicely detailed sailing story.
H
Thumbs up to a very very well written story. Hope it continues to progress. Dan needs to eat and clean more.
Please keep it going soon. For instance, how did Lisa and Tom do?