by CaitlyCate
An intriguing and unexpectedly 'real' treatment of a relationship moving into bdsm territory. Emotional downs and ups keep the reader involved. It will be interesting to follow this relationship and watch Lena grow.
Nice to see the loving, caring aspect of a BDSM relationship. Well written and very much a turn on!
I very much enjoyed the way the relationship was set up, her neediness and condition are well portrayed and it's refreshing to see a character with a mental illness who isn't portrayed as some raving monster.
Technically the writing was tight and I can't think of an instance where I stopped and thought 'damn that little grammatical or spelling error pulled me out of the flow of the story' - which is so often the case on this site.
Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more. :)
I enjoyed this enormously -- it was certainly a new take on an old theme -- and all the better for being so!
Thank you for sharing your talent for story-telling with us; I am looking forward to reading part two as soon as you can post it. 5 *s.