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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A Bit Annoying

Why do you feel the need to seek every possible word for cock?

It's just annoying and distracting.

WBCO6250WBCO6250over 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback. Being a new writer, I appreciate any feedback I can get. Honestly, I thought I repeated the word cock too much to begin with and in my mind it didn't read very well. I think the feedback of someone else reading the words will help me be a better writer. Thanks again. I will work on it for future writings.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

An avalanche of colorful words. More than necessary.

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A happily married man who enjoys writing erotic stories. Not a professional writer by any means, but learning as I go to try and make a better story. While my current stories involve threesomes, I am working on expanding my writings toward other fantasies. Hopefully you all w...