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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 2 years ago
Epitome of love

The dream of almost every nephew, especially the one's who have good looking aunts.

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

**** Nice storytelling a good read. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

Lacks details. You wrote: "She varied techniques from time-to-time evoking differing sensations."

What were the 'techniques'? What was first? Then? Then? Then? Didn't she say anything while jerking? Didn't she discuss what she was doing and why? Didn't she ask whether he liked it? Did he like one technique rather than the others? Did jerking him get her hot? How? Did she do anything about it? What? Did she ask him how he liked her boobs? What did he want to do to/with them? What did he want her to to to him with them?

Four stars.

bhojobhojoalmost 2 years ago

Ouch dick snot! some other euphemism would be more palatable hehe ... also glaring evokes the idea of anger, staring/gazing is more neutral

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Although I’m no stranger to writing, I’ve never had the courage to share. When I came across this website, I found myself inspired to journal some of my own experiences and fantasies. As a visitor, I’ve enjoyed reading all the contributors’ stories and look forward to getting ...

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