All Comments on 'Relaxing at the End of the Day'

Congratulations on your first story! I didn't do that much :-P! It was very well written and very good...

This reminded me of how a photograph captures a moment. This was a little snapshot into Chrissie & Richie's life after they finished a hard day at work.

It was loving, passionate and with a little hint of fruitiness too. I can almost imagine another story with this couple in a different environment having another round of fun together :-)

I enjoyed this a lot! Well done on your first submission!

jaz said it all ;-) so when's the next snap shot due?

Good for you! This is an amazing start. Anything else in the works?

more please

Excellent start! I'm so glad you decided to do this, just wish I had known about it! Hope you do more. For a first submission this was damn near perfect :)

It's been over a year since this author posted her one and only story--a very good one. She should never doubt her ability to write excellent erotic fiction. It's way past time for her to use her talent and add to our enjoyment.

I second the previous comment! "Relaxing at the End..." is some excellent writing.

Why did you stop writing? Start again. I would like to read more.