by Farson_Underhill
well done . Ticked a lot of boxes in one go .. You certainly will have lots of readers i forecast.
Solid. You'll catch a lot of flak for the ending but honestly it's excellent. Why take smut too seriously?
Only two things wrong with this story; having sex inside a Port-a-Potty and the ending from left field. I think the smell of a portable toilet would be enough to kill most hardons, even in the cleanest of them. The ending was kind of a joke but didn't seem that funny. The rest of the story was super hot and would have been worth five stars. I thought it was awesome he got his mother's ass so easy and without her throwing a fit. Guess four will have to do.