All Comments on 'Relieving Her Son: Redux'

by Farson_Underhill

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sheeversheeverabout 1 month ago

well done . Ticked a lot of boxes in one go .. You certainly will have lots of readers i forecast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Absolutely horrible story, especially the end. Doesn't even deserve a 1

Holistic_VoyeurHolistic_Voyeur30 days ago

Good first story, but the ending didn’t fit. Keep writing and improving!

CapnRedCapnRed19 days ago

Solid. You'll catch a lot of flak for the ending but honestly it's excellent. Why take smut too seriously?

oldpantythiefoldpantythief16 days ago

Only two things wrong with this story; having sex inside a Port-a-Potty and the ending from left field. I think the smell of a portable toilet would be enough to kill most hardons, even in the cleanest of them. The ending was kind of a joke but didn't seem that funny. The rest of the story was super hot and would have been worth five stars. I thought it was awesome he got his mother's ass so easy and without her throwing a fit. Guess four will have to do.

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