All Comments on 'Relieving Her Tension'

Good writing. i felt like I was there every moment! Keep writing.

I envy this kind of writing....great seduction...and it's like I actually see the woman being seduced!

Winemaster

I liked this: well paced, well written (properly edited...LOL) The visualisations were on point as were the responses you described. All in all a good intro to your writing capability. Keep up the good work..

Loved it. It was beautifully written, and had a wonderful flow. I could actually feel the sensations as I read it, and it makes me want more.

I think it was good, although I noticed a lack of speech.