All Comments on 'Religious Extremes Ch. 02'

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodle10 months ago

Od all the hair brained, asinine, ridiculous plots. Fucked unconscious? Fucked while unconscious? That makes it rape. Throw in the physiological consequences snd all you have is a giant fucking mess. (Pun intended)

HPV, yeast infections, UTI’s, STD’s, her natural lubrication would dry up and she would get a nasty case of friction burn, three cocks stuffed in her would literally rip her open if she’s unprepared, dehydration, her pussy would be insanely sire, her leg muscles would be cramped and in agony.

The list goes on. If you’re going to write erotica, don’t make it so unbelievable that the words become so much noise on a page.

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I enjoy writing, D&D and good horror movies. I'm a bit of a geek, and glad to be one. My stories tend to be pretty character driven and I like stuff on the creative side. Since I do like a good story and since I am asexual as well as aegosexual and am here to explore sex in a ...

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