All Comments on 'Reluctant Submission Ch. 01'

Nice story so far but seems there's a missing paragraph at the end. She's talking to Vlad and then Isobel is there? A minor flaw in an otherwise engaging story. Looking forward to Part 2.

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I'll be reading the rest !

1. It’s not BDSM

As it stands without further explanation she is a woman who has just been kidnapped.

Anything claiming to be BDSM that isn’t Safe, Sane and Consensual is NOT bdsm. You need to explain the circumstances surrounding the scenario.