All Comments on 'Reluctant Submission Ch. 01'

1. It’s not BDSM

As it stands without further explanation she is a woman who has just been kidnapped.

Anything claiming to be BDSM that isn’t Safe, Sane and Consensual is NOT bdsm. You need to explain the circumstances surrounding the scenario.

I'll be reading the rest !

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Nice story so far but seems there's a missing paragraph at the end. She's talking to Vlad and then Isobel is there? A minor flaw in an otherwise engaging story. Looking forward to Part 2.