All Comments on 'Reminiscing'

by AlJen

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Anonymousover 8 years ago

Good first-time story

But I'd like to know if there really is a guy out there who didn't blow his wad in about 10 seconds the very first time.

lonelyQuad over 8 years ago

I like your premise but why not take the next step and be a story teller...

I just finished a pathetic sci-fi story and with your short sex scenerio I was left with this guy living in the moment, and this girl was possibly a sucubus. WHAT WILL HAPPENS NEXT? This guy's little head may have gotten him into some serious sh#t... keep writing (find an editor-not me-i can't spell).

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