All Comments on 'Renting a Beach Villa Pt. 01'

Sounds like the best holiday rental you could have. Nice villa, jacuzzi and all the cock, cum and pussy one could or would need. 5 star facility and story, continue please.

You painted a picture of a resort of debauchery. Where can one get a reservation.

Would have given this five stars - great concept, decently drawn characters and good action - but, well, the slip here and there from narrative to first person was a little "fingernails on blackboard". Minor thing of course that good editing will fix - looking forward to the rest of the story!