All Comments on 'Reparations'

punish her for being a slut, by making her a whore... how does this work?

Cuck, should have put this in fetish category dumbass

Cuck trash

That was just terrible. Leave the cunt behind and divorce her.

standard cuck shit

"This isn't about pay-back, this is about reparations"

Pray-tell, how are they any different? The author made no effort to explain away their difference. The only thing we know as a reader is the main character views cheating badly, even with permission. And then gives his wife permission to fuck and suck random guys to, "humiliate her". But he enjoys it, she enjoys it. This is a cuck story pretending to be a RAAC one.

Since she cheated and humiliated him, without permission.....I can't seem to wrap my head around doing the same stuff...with his permission as reparations. Hell, the definition of reparations is to GIVE BACK what you took. Wouldn't that literally fall under the words PAY BACK?

Idiotic story. The entire plot is based on the author taking a hard stand that two synonyms are vastly different concepts with no effort as to why. And since the plot moves the story along, it's a big deal.

Oh a cuckold story disguise into a dom story, he doesnt even Fuck the wife best Friend, what a crap story

Genuinely WTF? This gets you off? Good luck with that.

Cuck stories belong in the fetish category. Having read the previous comments i simply went to the end and smiled as I clicked one star. Maybe if assholes like you get scores below 2 often enough you'll quit. Think about it. How pathetic must a story be to not even achieve a rating of 2?

Ugh! Thought it at least had potential as a harsh revenge story, then skipped to the end when he was hopin for her to have another guy's baby, Didn't go back to read the whole thing.

Stupidest premise ever.

Her punishment for being a slut and a whore is to be? A bigger slut and whore!

God damn...this author rambles on for pages about what a whore he makes her...he's proud she fucks other men now. And at the end he is entertaining her having another man's child that he will raise as his own with the whore?

What a fucking dickless moron. Pathetic.

Stop writing. And seek help. A lot of serious mental help.

Garbage

BWhahahahahahaaaa

Straight up homosexual writer here kids.

This story has been done and been done better. Do us all a favor and head over to the gay section and write your cock desiring Oedipus Rex. But please make it less fucking funny.

What a stupid misogynist! You obviously hate women, love humiliating yourself and feel like a loser. Only a true loser could feel good about writing such crap. Alo you're so dumb you try to pass of a Fetish story as a LW. Please enlist at least ten writers to help you. Minus 25000 stars!!

WEAK! This wack ass plot. What a let down.

Quit reading at page one. Really? Your slut wife cucks you, takes a train and you tell her you still love her? Pile of shit!

crap

Its an amazing phenomenon how the cuck gets a set of balls the day after. But wont do anything while shes getting plowed.

It was good up to him giving Roy a beat down. After that it turned to shit. Especially at the end when he said they would take a chance with the second child. WTF? If he was a man, instead of just a willing cuck, he would have packed his camp on his bike after beating Roy, then just rode away and left her to her new life as a biker whore. He could have divorced her and found a better woman. Try again.

Not sure where reparations came in, seems he just went from being an unwilling cuck to a willing one.

Motorcycle club stories are about as bad as they get. Always a macho alpha biker, always a slut wife zapped by the Martian Slut Ray, she always ignores her husband and immediately does anything the alpha tells her to do, the husband always wimps out and we always want to beat our heads on a brick wall...because it feels better and makes more sense than the actual story. -- 1☆

Wellll, I kept reading in hopes that this wasn't just another cuck story. Now sorry that I gave it so much time. He could have at least partially saved it by fucking Maryanne, instead of jacking off all over himself. Typical Cuck

Total crap cuck shit

Fair start but this tale went south very quickly, not sure what happened to reparations either.

After a few minutes of contemplation it hit me, REPARATIONS!! She needs to prove that she REALLY wants me back. I needed to pretend I wanst really nothing but a spineless cuck

fixed it for you,

pro tip, if you dont want the btb crowd to give you nothing but one star USE the cuck tag and we skip your cuck stories

Cut it to one page. Leave it with Roy's ass on the ground and Leah on her knees agreeing to being his slave for the next year. Write a two-hundred work epilogue and you're done. After page one, it got worse every scene. The last page was literally the jaw dropper... The guy who beat Roy into the dirt was not the one who finished the story. 2/5.

How does allowing her to have sex with other men during

the year constitute a punishment.

She clearly enjoyed it just as she did at the campsite.

A sorry marriage!

3

This guy should have just slit his wrists rather then ever get married. Clearly not actually into women at all.

This story confused me. It started strong and then kind of went in a very different direction. I suppose the 'reparations' as Leach doing what he wanted. But I agree with TerriC below, it felt like this was missing a tag.

After the opening scene, I knew we were going to reconcile, but not sure how I feel about it after reading it.

Thank you for putting in the effort for writing it though.

Well, I don't know if there were any reparations nor any real punishments given out. Seems like Leah got the best of everything. She got to fuck a couple of guys quite a bit as well as learning to deepthroat, as well as making love to another woman. He got to watch. Seems Leah got the best deal as she really did not have to do very much. I thought we would finally get a good story of how a wife is really used to gain the trust of her husband. The first page seemed to set the stage for some good revenge but then everything fell off of the stage with a thud. I am glad that there seemed to be a real end to the time frame of the reparations as most stories just end without any resolutions. The author could have done a lot with the story but chose to tame it down.

I mean I like him making her his sub and how much she loves it, but the cuck shit is just so unsexy to me. And LW is infested with cuck shit

Another BORING revenge tale.

I stopped reading on page 2 when he "reclaimed" his wife. I like to think the story ended with both dying from incurable STIs.

FIX THE FUCKING TAGS!!!!!

Yeah!!! Pretty fucked up story, telegraphed and twisted…. All at the same time.

The author should have quit at the end of page 1. It only went down hill from there. And why would he want one of his friends knock up his wife and raise the kid as his own? That just screams cuck to me, as you know your wife fucked another guy while married to you, and you get to see the child everyday. He grew a set of balls, then put them in a jar on a shelf. What a waste. About the only thing he got to do was anal with her (after claiming she wouldn't do it because it was "dirty". Little did she know how much she would enjoy it.

Bikers share their woman if they give permission but could e deadly if they cheat

stupid man a fucking wimp and a nasty whore.

Please come out with a part deux! And don’t give any of these negative commenting nancies any thought!

Though the MC proved he was a man.

Nah. Just got lucky with Roy I guess.

I never have respect for cuckolds, neither does anyone.

Even his wife.

What a steaming pile of shit!.

CUCK WRITER AND CUCK STORIES

step one destroy your key board what a bunch of shit

I liked the beginning, but by page 2, I realized where this was heading, and totally lost interest. 1 star.

Total crap

step one - destroy your keyboard, what a bunch of shit

step two - delete all your stories

her punishment for cheating, was being allowed to cheat? sorry 1 star

Stop writing cuck

Who the fuk are you you talk of being a Dom and staying married after 12 months of punishment instead you wimp out and whore her out to your friends. Wimppy

Wow. Been a long time since I've read something THAT bad and LW section gets a lot of bad stories.

dont think there was any punishment here could be wrong but dont think its punishment if the person gets off on it

omg he pimped her out and stayed married to her lol glad i stopped reading lol

So her punishment for fucking other guys was for her to fuck and blow other guys, oh and chuck in have lesbian sex

All he got out of it was to fuck her ass

Oh nearly forgot, and for him to get his jollies watching her cuckold him with his blessing.

I think he owes Roy and Manuel an apology

Getting kissed with another guys load with only one lash punishment and opting to just watch to ladies go at it as opposed to a threesome drops the rating here. It seemed she was running things despite even with him being in control.

I like the way he handled his business, like a real man.

This cuck trying to be macho. Stupid. Cum just only watching his wife doing lesbian?? Wtf??!!

What a stupid story, second time around

Once he started her fucking strangers and friends the tale lost all meaning and sense and just devolved into stupidity.

I gave 1/5 originally, wish l could give it less what an awful story.

Started off good. Then went down the tube. Making her his sub with punishment was fine. The moment he let her (was her idea remember) suck/fuck other guys went to shit. All the while "he dosent cheat". Bullsgit story.

I hate giving bad feedback but jeeze you must have a sick mind to write this. Unfortunately i cant give a minus rating.