by maxout09
I try never to suggest plot to authors, but I love this story so far. I imagine at some point soon Julie loses access to cock in her pussy and can only give her ass and mouth for his pleasure.
Anyways, great story. Spelling is an issue, but the story is so great that I overlook it.
Great work, looking forward to more.
So. how is it that you publish this with fairly good quality editing re: sentence structure, paragraph structure, plotting etc., but spelling is so weak? Micheal/Michael (over and over and over), Colsen/Coleson, material bed for matrimonial? It's often enough to significantly lower the rating, and wreck the reading experience... When someone writes something that is obviously in a second language I can't be critical, but this is better than average except for this one aspect that makes a native english reader grind their teeth...
Amber she is taking over I like her dominance over was it Julie she's become an after thought, I hope she likes her new station