by dmallord
Actually this has been a very good story with all the action and the twins to go with it, but as you say all good things eventually have both a good ending and an end. Perhaps it is time for you to move on to another adventure with new characters. Keep up with the excellent stories ass I read each one as I find them.
Great series. I especially enjoyed the storyline which had enough body to it carry itself even if the sex was removed.
I put enjoyed the story and would love to see it continue. This being said, if you don't continue I think if you're able to write an epilogue at least to wrap things up with the twins (and maybe Sally if you were planning anything there) it around be great.
Once again,
Thanks
I am really enjoying your story so please don’t end it there
Thank each one of you for your encouragement to continue the story. As one commenter noted, the story line could stand alone even without the sex scenes - that I find very flattering to my ego! Could I be a 'writer' actually?
So ... I will keep the story line open. It make take a bit of time to figure out the direction it will follow. But as someone noted, there are several subplots available to flush out. One of the most interesting is where the new reveal of Gabby's secret, being kept from Jim, will take the characters as Rescuing a Snow Angel further unfolds.
I thought it was a 4-41/2 but the ending was so crappy! he is a lost soul and you lost that part of your story. Leaving it that way was not well thought out. A possible life with love, baby and the unfinished feelings for Sally. You need to finish this story. i would say at least 3 more chapters. get to it.